[@Izurich] Notes: - LOVE the art you chose. - that full title is hilariously a mouth full and I love it. - Strengths/Weaknesses - I think these are fine as is as long as her Stubbornness gets her into trouble. I.E. She's too stubborn to admit that that scary dark forest is too much for her so she goes in anyway and then screams for help when it's too much. - Skills - Being a first year 15 year old, I imagine the skills would be a bit more heavier on the novice side of things. However, with her upbringing much of the skills that she has make sense for her to have. So I think they're fine. Just be mindful that if you start too high, there's not much room for growth. I'd be interested to know what direction you see her Character growth going. - Power - I LOVE the power, and I like the built in weakness it has. My only concern plot wise is with her enchantment skill, actually. I think I'm going to allow it, but my reasoning is because I think that if she uses it on someone, she will lose reputation with them and will find it hard to make and keep friends if they find out she's been enchanting them. She'll also likely deal with some self-doubt in wondering if people liking her is her magic or herself. So as long as you discuss with any writer she might use the power on before doing so, I'm fine with it. For example, Karmilla wants Character A to do her a favor, she needs some intel from Character B. But she knows Character A would never get it for her without a little persuasion. You'd need to discuss with at least the writer of Character A how their character would react to being enchanted and if they even could be. Maybe they have a very strong will. Adolescence - Idk why this made me laugh so much, but it did. Let me know if you have any questions regarding my feedback, if you're in agreeance, then consider her accepted. [@The Savant] I'm excited to see them! Edit: Also, idk why but this has given me the idea to use Fire Emblem characters for rando one-off npcs. Lol.