[quote=@JewelSerket]
[@Enkryption] Most of your CS looks good! I just caught the name, though. The name is alright, but the title and name are separate. I apologize because the naming conventions are WEIRD in this series. I'll look at explaining it better when I'm more awake. So your character could have the name One Poisoned Rose and the title The Poisoned. Or something of the like. I suggest you keep the name One Poisoned Rose. It's very pretty! Other than that, it looks good to me!
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I see, I see. I can amend that easily enough.