[quote=@Achronum]
[@Kronshi] Okay, so after reading this is definitely a solid base but a few questions on this:

1 - Your sheet states that he makes friends with Fire Nation citizens easily. I wanted to touch base to make sure you understood that the Fire Nation citizenship does not like the air benders as a whole right now. Their decision not to take any action in the war has painted them in a nasty light, and the regular citizen knows this. Having individuals friends that are understanding makes sense, but overall public perception of this character as a person in the Fire Nation is very, very poor. 

2 - Most of your character's details only mention him in relation to his training and his relationship with the air temple. Who is he, what does he like, what does he do in his free time, and what sort of travels has he gone on that have impacted him in his time as a messenger. The world is in the state of unrest, and has been even before the formal declaration of war, and despite his worldliness, he feels relatively 2D. 

3 - Finding the Avatar is a great point in this, but what were his motivations before this? What are his plans once the he reaches his goal? As someone who chafes against the chains of tradition, why is he comfortable accepting what they say instead of changing?

Like I said, it's a solid foundation but it feels a little incomplete and not fully attached to the world. I want to learn more about him as a person, not just his attitude!
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1 - I meant it more as an he gets along with them not necessarily that they get along with him. Like, he likes Fire Nation mentality and ideology so he sees them as potential allies very quickly type of thing. However, since the first actual attack was a year ago, he had time before that to befriend a few people I would think. Please correct me if that's wrong.

2 - I will definitely work on adding this, but I would suggest adding more sections for deeper character info than just Personality and Background if you wanted more than that. The CS was simple so I thought to keep things simple.

3 - Read 2.