[@Kronshi] The expansion on the bending style melding is wonderful. I really liked it and I hope that the various story elements that you expanded on in your backstory will come into play if your character enters the RP. I think my only oncern is that it's a pretty complex piece of role-playing, this bending style fusing, and I wonder if you have the writing stamina to weave it into the entire rp.

[@Xandrya] I genuinely believe that you will get bored with this character. While you hit all the check marks for what should be on the sheet, there's no energy, passion, or interest in her. This character revolves around one major facet of her life, and doesn't have anything else to connect her to the world. This k about her outside of her bending and her drama, and insert some of that into her CS to bring her forward and out of the background. Finding a hobby she likes is always a good one!

[@Andreyich] Man War Criminal to the max! I'm very interested in his mortal slider here. Why is poisoning a settlement and forcing prisoners of war to work for you more acceptable than looting and stealing? What implications do you think this has on his interactions with the rest of the group and dies he/will he acknowledge that he is in fact, a war criminal?

[@Thayr] I got a lot of questions here. Why is the Dai Li taking your family? Why are they hunting you? How does a character with little training hold of a squad of Earth Kingdom soldiers? And I'm not gunna lie - friendship issues always make me nervous in rps. There is going to be a lot of character on character time; how do you feel like you are going to get around this roadblock yourselves set yourself?

[@Asura] Hey, this is great. Right from his character sheet, you can feel that he is a mo k and highly spiritual, despite his attitude towards the Air Noamd culture. I don't have any revisions for you and that is in fact, a threat. Please move your m CS over tho the character sheet tab.