[@webboysurf] First thing's first, this "He leans more on the lean side," physically hurts me! However, his quirkiness is fun and even the darker part of his backstory keeps the lighter energy of the show. It's a well done sheet and I don't have any questions - though it gives me plenty of ideas 😊

[@Eviledd1984] Firstly, characters must be between 18 - 24, which you are well outside the range of. Secondly, your backstory is difficult to reconcile with the reality of the setting. Big things like direct monarchy bloodlines should always be discussed with a GM first to ensure that it fits within your setting, the prowess of this character is scaled well higher than it should be, and the weight of this backstory does not match the theme and atmosphere of the rp. I highly recommend that you remove the connection to royalty from the friend, adjust your backstory so it isn't as heavy and aggressive, and tone down the potential power levels of te character.

[@Scribe of Thoth] Out of curiosity, how much interaction does Tao have with the populace of Ba Sing Se? He basically lived as a normal kid through his upbringing there or was a he mostly aloof? I'm not certain how much connection to some of the existing NPCs he may have without understanding this better!

[@JewelSerket] My biggest question is the going from the fire nation to the Earth Kingdom. I know the character disengaged from their current life several days before the temple lights appeared but from temple lights to current, it'll be three days. Talk me through the journey between the two places, as three days through heavily contested waters seems difficult.

[@Aku the Samurai] Okay so I see what we did here, but I got a few questions. Firstly, what is your character joining the Rebellion for. Is it just boredom? If this is the case, take some time to think about it a bit deeper with this character. Secondly, while connecting with major NPCs is a great thing,  it needs to be discussed with a GM before starting this. Please change that portion of it from your CS and clarify them motivate please!

[@Xandrya]DM me about how you are thinking about incorporating this drawing atuff that makes you not want to spoil it :)