Most of it posted okay, [s]but you need to check your image links - they're just showing the link text, instead of the image.[/s] Never Mind. Also, you might want to add some line-spacing between your titles to allow things to read easier. In terms of the info though, that's all fine and I have no probs accepting him :) 
I'll add a list of confirmed characters to the OP this evening. And do my own character(s)! 

Also, I should note before I forget: Cross-training will be available later on, so non-human characters may end up piloting human mecha and vice-versa. And you don't always have to stick with the same machine. There may be some missions where you might be assigned a different one for whatever reason, or if yours is damaged or otherwise unavailable.