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Title: Terisa of the piercing strata
Full Name: Terisa Sokolov
Age/DOB (before the slumber): 26
Height/Weight: 5'6 /128
Sex/Gender: Female

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Personality: Originally Terisa was a very patient soul. Taking her time like an archer taking aim, awaiting for the single perfect moment in time. Then with all the speed and certainty moving in a strait line to the target with astounding results. Whenever a choice is offered one can be assured that Terisa would weigh all the angles, choose the best item to get the task done in a single shot.

The corruption has made Terisa impatient, very impatient after learning her time was wasted and she never got married or experienced life fully. While in the void it was not the waiting or continual nothingness, it was the lack of substance, it was the constant reminder of all of life's bounty she was being denied. The once ginger now has become glutton for all that life has to offer in all its forms! 

Main Magic: Breath of creation
Secondary magic: Air, flow, void

Virtue Key: Raudra, Compound bow 
Utilizing Vitanima the bow creates softly glowing blue arrows. These mystic arrows are capable of piercing any target bypassing armor or hardness as spiritual damage. The Compound bows mystic ammunition is harmless to inanimate objects passing through them. The bows one weakness is water, the bolts seem to disburse in the life giving element.
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So, you still seem to be missing the idea here? (friendly) Breath and Air are one in the same, Air is just another name for ethe core element of Breath. The notes of Breath are Loose, Drift, and Range, while the abstracts of Breath are Freedom, Tranquility, Growth, as can be seen in the [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/5519599]Zeroth post[/url]

This means that Terisa would have a core focus of Breath, and her applications of this would allow her to utilize its note of Drift in conjunction with its abstract of Freedom to both reach into the minds of others and glimpse into the future through the astral plane as her soul [i]drifts[/i] and exists in [i]freedom[/i] from the mortal plane

I suggest altering the CS to have Focus Core and Applications the way I did for Aleksei as it allows for more freedom and explanation in how an element is used by the character!