[quote=@Zoey Boey] big girl large lady she will stop a bus from falling over the side of the bridge. [hider=Crane][center][hr][hr] [color=orange][h1][b]CRANE[/b][/h1][/color] [b][color=white]"Oh, my."[/color][/b][/center][hr][hr] [color=white][B][ NAME ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Ting Feng[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ HERO IDENTITY ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]CRANE[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ NICKNAME/ALIAS ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT] Tiff, Dumpling [/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ AGE ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Nineteen[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ GENDER ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Female[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ AFFILIATION ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]HERO [/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ APPEARANCE ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Ting Feng is tall. Very tall. Approximately ten meters, or thirty three feet tall. She is also wide, as in muscular, with broad shoulders. Her light brown skin is darkened somewhat by exposure to the sun, and her black hair is cut short above her ears, with her short bangs usually swept to the side. Her skin is freckled, and the freckles are the size of most people's fists. She has a wide nose and big eyes, proportional to her face. For Ting Feng, her super hero clothing and her civilian clothing are pretty much one in the same. Back in the day she used to wear massive cloth cloaks. Now, with the power of technology, she usually wears athletic, skin-tight clothing. She wears a sleeveless cropped sports top. It's white, with orange outlines around the arms and torso, and a black, circular symbol that resembles a crane spinning a vortex. For a bottom, she wears black leggings that go all the way down to her ankles, where her feet are bare. Her outfit is made of a durable, waterproof material.[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ PERSONALITY TRAITS ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT] Ting Feng is quite bubbly, earnest, and excitable, but she's always almost sneaking around like she's trying not to upset a particularly touchy librarian. Whenever she senses her emotions are getting too roused, she apologetically reels them back in. Even her voice, if she speaks too loudly, can do serious damage. There's a genuine sense of gentleness about her. Crane carries herself deliberately, and with poise. As far as heroes go, Ting Feng is what some in the business call: "The Real Deal". She's one of those true believer hero types, whose primary motivation is just the goodness of their heart. Of course, the money doesn't hurt, though Tiff sends most of it back home to her family, and saves the rest. To her view she doesn't have much to spend money on. Praise and applause has always made her self-conscious, but Tiff has spent her entire life being self-conscious. There's kind of an eternal embarrassment involved with being a giant. It feels like constantly being under a dozen different microscopes. She'd much prefer to be one of those anonymous hero types, but...that's not really possible, is it? Tiff tries to considerate of other people's feelings, though she isn't confident of her skills as a conversationalist. The last thing she wants to do is upset people. Being so far away, it is relatively easy for her to miss some emotional queues. And due to her overall kind-heartedness and trusting nature, Tiff is easily beguiled. Some might call her naive, others might just say she looks for the best in other people. When she isn't heroing around, Tiff's favorite place to be is the ocean. It's a new novelty to her, having not grown up around any. There's no place she feels like she can be herself than in a big body of water with no one and nothing around to step on. It's so big, it can even make her feel small, which is liberating. Back in the day her old hobbies were yoga, tai chi, and messing around in the woods. Now swimming has been added to the list. [/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ BIO ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Ting Feng is the child of an immigrant who moved from China to the United States, and ended up in the country side. Ting Feng was a normal sized baby who just got bigger and bigger as she grew up. Her growth spurt, as her mother put it, never stopped. Ting Feng had to learn early on how to be careful around other people, and was quite grateful when she stopped growing the year she turned 16. One odd benefit of Ting Feng's unusual biology was the lack of needing to eat, but Ting Feng still ate her mothers dumplings, which was the source of her nickname. She did her first act of heroism as a fifteen feet tall 10 year old, smacking around a supervillain and his troops. This made the local news and it turned out Ting Feng, more than just carrying heavy things around for the rest of her life, wanted to be a superhero! Tiff, as she was called by some of her classmates, was mostly well-liked despite her differences. There would always be some loneliness to her condition, though, in a world not meant for her. Every year she just got bigger and bigger, and the people she loved got smaller and smaller. Moving to the big city seemed like a natural fit. Her mother was reluctant to let her go, but when she turned nineteen, she was finally allowed to 'pack her bags' and leave her midwestern hometown. Though, when she did, she would find herself missing the big open space. But being in a place bustling with people just as radically different and unusual like her, where her strength and gifts would be appreciated, and where she could make enough money to give her family a comfortable life? Tiff would put up with it. She is a rookie superhero with little experience beyond defeating a low tier supervillain.[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][b]| MISCELLANEOUS |[/b][/color] [color=orange][indent]Probably has a large online presence by default. Not entirely wholesome, either. She has nothing to do with it, and there's not much to be done. In fact, please don't tell her. [/indent][/color][/hider] [hider=Abilities] [color=white][B][ RANKING ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT] Kappa Class[/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ POWERS ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Truly large, with super strength and durability to match. She has a slight regeneration factor, only relevant in scale of days, rather than minutes. Lighter than she ought to be, and she can sustain herself from the sun in lieu of eating or drinking. [/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ PHYSICAL STRENGTH ][/B][/color] ■■■■■■■■■■ [color=orange]Very big. Very strong. She can lift many tons of weight, able to pick up a car in one hand like a dumbbell in the gym. You'll probably not find any Hero in the world capable of physically moving as much matter as her.[/color] [color=white][B][ AGILITY ][/B][/color] ■■■□□□□□□□ [color=orange]Crane has trained her agility to be greater than most people, but has no supernatural advantage in it. She might seem slow, but this is just an illusion of scale. Still, if someone is genuinely fast, they'll be able to outpace her. [/color] [color=white][B][ INTELLIGENCE ][/B][/color] ■■□□□□□□□□ [color=orange]Crane had a decent, standard education.[/color] [color=white][B][ DESTRUCTIVENESS ][/B][/color] ■■■■■□□□□□ [color=orange]Crane can be incredibly destructive, fully capable of levelling buildings. But she has to be within arms reach to do so, or within the reach of something very heavy. If something is very big, she'll have to stomp and smash around a bit, targeting the supports.[/color] [color=white][B][ LETHALITY ][/B][/color] ■■■□□□□□□□ [color=orange]Not that she ever would, but she is very capable of squishing people. Beyond that, she has nothing unusual about her ability to bring harm beyond who she can touch or what she can throw. So her lethality relies on her longer reach and throwing capacity. If you challenged her and a normal person to destroy a dummy that was twenty feet away, she could 'kill' the dummy about as fast as anyone who knows how to stick thumbs into eyeballs real good.[/color] [color=white][B][ ENDURANCE ][/B][/color] ■■■■■■■■■□ [color=orange]Very big. Very tough. Down to the cellular level, viruses are literally unable to penetrate the outer walls of her cells. All conventional and most unconventional weaponry bounces off. Clever enemies may deduce that blunt, energy, gas, or electrical attacks, for example, might be more effective against her. She also has no resistance against anything that might directly bypass her incredible physical durability. But still: Guns? Nothing. Not even the big ones. Even a shot to the eyeball wouldn't do much beyond annoy her a little more, and she can always just blink.[/color] [color=white][B][ EFFICACY ][/B][/color] ■□□□□□□□□□ [color=orange]Tiff can become tired out quicker than the average person if she does too much strenuous activity too quickly. Eating or drinking is more trouble than it's worth, and it takes a while for the sun to recoup her energy. One downside of her size and durability is that if she ever is injured, conventional medical treatment is useless.[/color] [color=white][B][ SKILLS ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Tai Chi- A defensive martial art/ form of exercise. Mostly used to improve her balance and spatial awareness. [/INDENT][/color] [color=white][B][ EQUIPMENT ][/B][/color] [color=orange][INDENT]Most equipment she has access too, she is just carrying around for other people. Most technology is beyond her ability to use.[/INDENT][/color] [/hider] [/quote] Love her. Near polar-opposite personality from my OC funnily enough. Going to be interesting to see how she adapts to the world. Conditionally accepted (see below). [quote=@shylarah] [hider=Amuné Ris] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/g8DuQJt.png[/img] [color=goldenrod][h1][b]ORACLE[/b][/h1][/color] [b][color=goldenrod]"The future is a tricky thing...."[/color][/b][/center][hr][hr] [color=goldenrod][B][ REAL NAME ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné Ris[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ HERO NAME ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Oracle[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ NICKNAME/ALIAS ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Né (to very close friends)[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ AGE ][/B][/color] [INDENT]16 (born July 15th)[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ GENDER ][/B][/color] [INDENT]female[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ AFFILIATION ][/B][/color] [INDENT]HERO operative[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ APPEARANCE ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné is lanky and thin, almost gangly. It's evident that she will be on the tall side as an adult, but right now she's not yet grown into her long limbs. Her eyes are grey, set above a nose sprinkled with freckles. Her brown hair is cut in an angled bob, longer in front than in back. She favors hard-wearing clothes, though she won't pass up an opportunity to dress nicely when given one. As a hero, she wears a light kevlar vest and jeans, along with sturdy boots.[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ PERSONALITY TRAITS ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné can be slow to trust, and is not the best at being a team player -- an aspect of herself she is working hard to improve. She is very self-reliant, and dislikes burdening others with her problems, though she's made great strides at opening up in the past several years. Though she can be prickly, her friends find her reliable, thoughtful, and trustworthy, with a strong moral compass.[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ BIO ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné came into her powers at a very young age. She was all of five when she asked her father why her mommy wasn't coming home -- the day her mother died in a car accident. Her father didn't take the revelation well, turning to drink as a source of comfort. When a pair of suits claiming to be from a local hero organization turned up and offered to take custody of the girl, he didn't look too closely at things, and let her go with them despite her protests. This was a mistake. What followed was several years of extreme unpleasantness in the care of the Ring that ended when an actual hero organization stepped in and freed the young supers in their clutches. Amuné does not speak of this portion of her past much, and still carries trauma from that time. About a year after she was freed, she was placed with a foster family on Passenger Island, and sent to attend the Academy for Junior Heroes to learn to master her abilities. While things were at first exceedingly difficult for her, through therapy and the care of her foster family Amuné has come to be a relatively well-adjusted teenager.[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][b]| MISCELLANEOUS |[/b][/color] [indent]Amuné still attends therapy to help her deal with the problems of her past.[/indent] [/hider] [hider=Abilities] [color=goldenrod][B][ RANKING ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Lambda Class[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ POWERS ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné is a Seer, meaning she has visions of past, present, and sometimes future. Objects and places can carry echoes of past events, which she can read. In a fight, if she focuses, she can sense incoming attacks slightly before they occur, allowing her to dodge them better than she could otherwise. Contact with an opponent lets her 'read' them, discerning information about them that might not be readily apparent. [/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ PHYSICAL STRENGTH ][/B][/color] ■■□□□□□□□□ Amuné is of average strength. [color=goldenrod][B][ AGILITY ][/B][/color] ■■■□□□□□□□ Amuné's precog ability allows her to dodge better than average. [color=goldenrod][B][ INTELLIGENCE ][/B][/color] ■■□□□□□□□□ Amuné is of average intelligence. [color=goldenrod][B][ DESTRUCTIVENESS ][/B][/color] ■■□□□□□□□□ Amuné is of average destructiveness [color=goldenrod][B][ LETHALITY ][/B][/color] ■■■□□□□□□□ Given her ability to detect weaknesses, Amuné is slightly better than average lethality. [color=goldenrod][B][ ENDURANCE ][/B][/color] ■■■■■□□□□□ Amuné has a high endurance, gained through extensive training. [color=goldenrod][B][ EFFICACY ][/B][/color] ■■■■□□□□□□ Amuné has excellent control over her powerset, though sometimes visions will hit her for no apparent reason. She cannot use her powers to control other people. [color=goldenrod][B][ SKILLS ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné is a capable fighter with both knife and gun[/INDENT] [color=goldenrod][B][ EQUIPMENT ][/B][/color] [INDENT]Amuné carries a pocketknife at all times.[/INDENT] [/hider] [/quote] She seems adorable, always a need for the team baby. The one critique I would like to raise is just a little more descriptiveness on the powers. Just a little more detail on maybe how she sees these visions, differentiating between the sudden foresight versus big long seer visions versus cryptic future visions, and maybe how they come about. Overall, I really like here though! Also, important note for both of you + [@Duoya]: caught a minor mistake in the CS where there is a discrepancy between the threat level description and the listed categories in the abilities section. Just to make things consistent, I added the two missing sections in, so if you could add that when you get a chance! Plus, for people working on your CSes now, let it be known that that is a thing. Thanks, sorry for the problem, still getting off the rust.