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[b]VIM HABENDUM[/b]
"I'm not dangerous. I was born this way."

REAL NAME: Eve Cadeicus

ALIAS: VIM HABEDUM (TRANSLATED FROM LATIN: A FORCE TO BE RECKONED WITH.)

AGE: 13 

Gender: Female

Affiliation: None yet.

Appearance: Shorter brown hair, and very scrawny. Eyes are so light blue it's unnatural, which is how she is mostly described. She doesn't look real. Hunched posture, and just overall looking like a salamander in a human skinsuit. 

Personality: Eve used overwhelmingly, soul crushingly lonely. Despite most people not even acknowledging her, she tried her best to act friendly and normal. Now, she's more closed off and suspicious.

Bio: Eve was born incredibly powerful, which was noticed when she was only 1 1/2 years old. She was whisked away from her parents, who were promptly assassinated, and brought to a secure facility. She didn't grow up knowing love, but she wasn't necessarily unhappy. She wasn't the only kid there, but the others didn't like her very much. On her 12th birthday, she was let out to speak with the head scientist on her yearly progress. (An annual event.) But to her surprise, she found an open file on his desk. 

It had everything about her, and shockingly, she wasn't angry. Or sad. She was just... empty. And so she simply turned and left. (Leaving a trail of dead scientists in her wake.) She mostly avoids capture, while trying to really understand everything that happened with her.

Misc: Her age is kinda essential to her story.

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Ranking: 
OMEGA CLASS

Powers: 
Forces of mass destruction, as in mass earthquakes, fires, hurricanes, tornadoes, tsunamis, etc.
Also just basic telekinesis, pyrokinesis, etc.

Physical strength:
1/10
Eve is scrawny, and very easily overpowered.

Agility:
8/10
Eve is also fast, making her very agile.

Intelligence: 
Book smarts: 2/10
She wasn't taught very well in the lab.
Common sense: 6/10
Has learned a lot since her expedition out of the lab.

Destructiveness:
6/10 
Sllllightly more bloodthirsty than need be.

Lethality: 
10/10
With her FOMD (Forces of mass destruction) She can have massive death tolls.

Endurance: 
4/10 
A little less than average.

Stamina:
5/10
Average.

Efficacy:
1/10
Almost no control whatsoever.

Surveillance level:
10/10
She is incredibly dangerous, purely because she has no idea how to control her powers at all.

Skills: 
General evasive skills.

Equipment:
A lightweight pistol.









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Thanks for taking the time to fill out a CS.

Just based on what has been submitted, I don't feel like this character would make a particularly good fit into the RP. First, she is too young to meaningfully and consistently interact with the rest of the cast and really havr a recurring role in the story. Her powers being extremely high-powered while also really having no limit outside of a lack of control does concern me as well.

I am also worried about how well you would fit into the RP and its posting requirements. If you were to re-submit, I would recommend looking at the other character sheets already accepted and model based on those. I would really like to see more depth to personality, backstory, and abilities sections, and ideally a faceclaim of some kind as well, barring any special exceptions.

Unfortunately I am going to have to deny this character at this time though. Message me if you want any more specifics.