After going over your sheet, there are a few things that do indeed need to be addressed.

Pilot: Nothing; perfectly acceptable.

A.W.E.: To start, your machine has 22 points out of the given 20, the 3 free points included, because you forgot to list and add the two points from your signature asset. You need to fill out the diagnostics at the bottom of the sheet as well.

Other then that, everything looks fine. Also, if you happen to have a friend who might be interested in joining this RP, please point them in this direction. Traffic seems to be slower here...