The backstory is still being written, and I would like some suggestions, but I mainly want to know if I did the abilities correctly.

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[url=https://youtu.be/LoBMRKIvwVU?feature=shared][h2]"I'm done making promises."[/h2][/url][/center]
[h3][b][i]Eryx Noctar Kaides[/i][/b][/h3]

[b]Age:[/b] 17 [27] | [b]Height: 6' 0"[/b] | [b]Voice: Tenor[/b] 

[h3][i]First Life[/i][/h3]

I don't really know how his bloodline would work, all I know is that he had a lot of siblings.

His weapon of choice is a spear, since it's easy to wield. He prefers spears that aren't heavy, because they require less effort.

There are a couple of key aspects to his backstory, the main one being how he watched his comrades die, and took it upon himself to fulfill their last wishes. After a while, he had made too many promises and ended up breaking all of them.

Another key aspect would be his lack of effort. He never tried his hardest, since his siblings seemed so powerful. Why would he need to? They could pick up his slack. He never saw their flaws, so he thought they were invincible.

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[*][b]Biggest failure:[/b] Allowing his comrade to die, when he could've saved them if he just trained harder.
[*][b]Biggest regret:[/b] Living his life by following the wishes of those around him, instead of following his own ideals.
[*][b]Biggest obstacle:[/b] His lack of motivation.
[*][b]Greatest achievement:[/b] Every battle where he survived was an achievement. Even if his comrades died, he was alive. And that was a triumph in its own right. He didn't view it that way though.
[*][b]Driving hope:[/b] Fulfilling the wishes of his dead comrades.
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[h3][i]Equipment[/i][/h3]
[list][*]A light-weight, golden spear
[*]Simple leather armor
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[h3][i]Abilities[/i][/h3]
[list][*]Physical Strength: 2nd Rate
[*]Aura: 2nd Rate
[*]Magic: 2nd Circle 
[list][*]Shield Spell - Creates a visible barrier in front of the user, blocking a single attack.
[*]Flash Step - Allows him to teleport exactly ten feet in any direction, requires a five-minute recharge.
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