[quote=@Zeroth] Looking good, here's a few comments I had: [/quote] Yo! Thanks for the feedback: For the first point, I edited it, now his Physical is down to 1st. For the second point, his Berserker deal will be his character arc, currently he doesn't know [i]why[/i] he does it, and I am not sure either, depending on how I develop the character the root of it may change but first he has to find it. After that it would come to the overcoming step, either accept it, control it, or reject it. And finally, for the last point, I don't have strong feelings either way, thought I would like to create the NPC companion who died.