[@The Savant] Love it! He's the kind of guy I like to see. Though he does have a LOT of expertise... not saying its a BAD thing, it can be a very useful and unique plot-leverage point, but it has the POTIENTAL to be. Aside from that, I don't have any comments on this unless there's something you wanna tinker.

[@Qia] Love this as well! Though, are you 100% you want her surname to be Drake? Just making sure haha.