[quote=@OwO]grandpa don't got game no more :([/quote] More like Grandma decided enough was enough, and announced this decision to Grandpa in such a way that the younger generation seem to have decided polygyny was a safer reproductive strategy XD [@Kazemitsu]As of your most recent edits, here's what I've got for feedback: [hider=KAESOS] His appearance image is fine for his "future" self, but there's no way he looked like that at 18 XD I'd appreciate something that's a little more accurate to his second-life self, even if only a few lines of text pointing out the differences (like, "at 18 the beard is only a persistent 5'o clock shadow" or something). Remember that right now your Equipment section is mostly a placeholder for your preferences; you won't be able to keep the fancy gear unless you make the effort to recover it in the second life. Experiences add up, so no issues there! And I know we already discussed backstory on Discord, so get on that![/hider] [@Thunder999999] Excellent work! I can tell you incorporated some of the more obscure lore stuff, like the lucid dreams, into his backstory. I always worry that I overthink way too much with my worldbuilding, so I appreciate seeing it put to use. Also really liking the mention of various NPCs, I'd like to see some of them show up in some capacity in the second life. Just get us either a text description or an Appearance Image and he'll be good to go! [@Remram] Very nice exploration of his inferiority complex! Everything else adds up, so we can add him to the pile of pre-approved! [h3]Here's what we seem to have thus far, if it helps anyone. I have included some suggestions, but they're not set in stone:[/h3] [hider=TIMELINE] [list][*]987 - Estelle born to Patriarch's 2nd Wife [*]988 - [@Teyao]Rowan born to ??Patriarch's 3rd Wife??, [@Silver Carrot]Sherry born to ??Patriarch's 1st Wife??, Isana born to Patriarch's 2nd Wife (likely w/difficulty) [*]989 - [@Kazemitsu]Kaesos born to ??Patriarch's Mistress or Fulvya Kaides?? [*]990 - [@Atlas946]Eryx born to Deividas's OtherOtherSon+Wife, Ferrucio born to Deividas's Daughter, Ophelia born to Patriarch's 2nd Wife [*]991 - Rodin born to Deividas's Son+Wife, [@MooiEen]Lucille born to Deividas's OtherSon+OtherWife. [*]992 - [@Thunder999999]Lucas born to Patriarch's 3rd Wife (No more children for her) [*]993 - Vincent born to ??Patriarch's 1st Wife?? (no more children for her either), Ophelia Poisoned, Lucas's Felicia is born somewhere [*]994-1000 - Events Unknown [*]1001 - Estelle enters Collegem. [*]1002 - Events Unknown [*]1003 - Isana, Rowan, and Sherry enter Collegem. [*]1004 - Kaesos enters Collegem. [*]1005 - Eryx, Ferrucio, and Ophelia enter Collegem. [*]1006 - Estelle was poisoned at 18 years old. Isana, Rowan, and Sherry are 17. Kaesos is 16. Eryx, Ferrucio, and Ophelia are 15. Rodin is 14, and enters Collegem. Lucas is 13, ??possibly about to turn 14??. Vincent is 12, about to turn 13. [*]1007 - SECOND LIFE BEGINS HERE. Lucas has probably been in Collegem for 1 semester; Vincent has just turned 14 and is preparing to enter Collegem. Estelle is close to completing her recovery, and now chooses whether or not to leave again. [*]1008 - Estelle's first life drifts, possibly finding the orphanage? [*]1009 - Isana fails to graduate at 21, leaves in search of Estelle. Sherry fails to graduate, is sent off to marry her fiancé, Unnamed Duke's Son. Rowan fails to graduate, ??is sent to the military?? [*]1010 - Rodin leaves Collegem at age 19 before even attempting to graduate. Kaesos fails to graduate at 21 (likely shortly after his birthday) and leaves Collegem. [*]1011 - Ophelia fails to graduate at 21, leaves Collegem. Eryx and Ferrucio either do the same, or have one more semester due to their birthday dates falling differently. By his 18th birthday this year Vincent has the conversation with the Patriarch that finally breaks him. [*]1012 - Lucille fails to graduate at 21, leaves Collegem. WAR STARTS. Eryx, Ferrucio, and Rowan are sent to (different parts of?) the front lines. Ophelia tries to take part in evacuations and logistics. Isana's Adventuring Party, Rodin's mercenary unit, and Estelle's orphans are all conscripted. Lucas is 19 ??about to turn 20??, Vincent is 18, about to turn 19. Both are likely struggling a great deal in Collegem due to most of the supportive members of their family no longer being around. [*]1013 - ??Estelle meets the Old Berserker?? Ophelia is confirmed at Lagentym. ??Eryx, Ferrucio, Rodin, Lucille, and Rowan are all possibly present at the Fall of Lagentym?? After Lagentym, Lucas is sent to the front lines almost immediately after failing to graduate. Kallyva is Occupied during Late Summer. [*]1014 - Events Unknown/Unaccounted for [*]1015 - Vincent fails to graduate at 21. The Patriarch's 2nd Wife is killed shortly before the invasion of the Royal Capital. Sherry is involved in strategy meetings in the Royal Court; after Ylliastrum falls she deserts and is captured by the army, ???including Any of the PCs??? Ferrucio is a last-resort pick to join the Royal Guard after this. [*]1016 - Events unknown/unaccounted for. [*]1017 - Rocks fall, everyone dies.[/list][/hider] I have most assuredly missed some things, but I tried to hit most of the major events; events that would've affected multiple siblings; events that we'd all remember; so on and so forth. Adding in every single minor detail, such as the Awakenings of those who finally achieved it or Allied NPC deaths, would probably bog us down too much. With that said, though, feel free to chip in wherever you think there's a potential for more story threads! [h3]Since we have 11 characters currently in progress, most of which are fairly far along if not pre-approved, let's work on making our finalizations. I will be working on the first IC post soon and should have it done either tomorrow or Thursday; however, it may not be posted immediately.[/h3]