[quote=@Silver Carrot] The only thing my CS really needs is that I can't think of a good skill [/quote] She uses a rapier, right? What about something like... "Auger Fang: A thrust from nearly hip level, driving the body's full weight into the blow while rotating the forearm and wrist. The concentrated force at the blade's point aims to drill a perfect hole into the target." [quote=@SilverPaw] [@Zeroth] I'll let you figure out the lore stuff and abilities. I may or may not add a few war related events (no idea if it's feasible, but had in mind her doing sth like augmenting a whole fortification of some place and just creating a bloodbath despite monsters and demons swarming her at some point). [@OwO], [@Rune_Alchemist] Feel free to add in to this. As far as I'm concerned, she's a NPC shared between the four of us. [/quote] Glavios Captain: "Ah, Lord Kaides, what brings you to the training grounds tod--" Patriarch: "The Big Woman still here?" XD The only thing I'd like to change is that, given power levels to rarity ratios in the setting, I think Grandmaster ranking would be better than Saint level. There are exactly 5 Divine-ranked warriors currently, and the number of Saints barely breaks into double digits. Not all of those at that level are Humans, either. If you want her to create a bloodbath, shouldn't she be Augmenting her weapon and maybe her own armor? If she augmented a defensive structure, it would make it tougher and whatnot, but wouldn't really do anything to damage enemies. I can handle establishing some extra lore and skills, no issue. And the Patriarch having to step in to stop her rampage after Estelle was poisoned 6 months ago gives me some ideas! Overall I really really like her! [@Atlas946] I can make the NPC then, no problem. As far as the changes to your sheet, everything's good, just make sure the illusion spell's noise and images are limited---by "noises," we're not talking about spoken words, and by "still image" we're not talking about like, an ultra-high-poly 3D projection of a deity or an entire castle's map layout, Etc. [quote=@Remram] How much input do we get in making the NPCs for our characters? [/quote] The NPC sheet is under the CS in the first OOC post; you can pretty much make them however you'd like, but if you want something spoilery or very plot-centered feel free to discuss it with me over PM!