[@Nyahahameha] So the strings on the zanpakuto will just be improvised for now. We had agreed they'll be more realized once she has obtained her Shikai.

Otherwise all details look good. If possible though for backstory I'd like it if you could form that into a proper multi-paragraph passage. If you can do this for some other sections too that'd be nice.

You are allowed to add it to character section in the current state with just an adjustment to the current zanpakuto description, so don't worry about that aspect.