[quote=@Avis Hunter]

[@RickyG85] Looks good, but I feel the backstory could use a little more polish. Also the first obstacle we'll be dealing with is a village of Goblimon causing issues, so a Goblimon being his partner could be handled in several different ways.
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Ok, to me polished is a matter of detail,  so what in particular needs work for the Backstory? Do you feel it's lacking a particular detail?