[quote=@Terry Bogard] Done! Is there anything I need to change, [@Lugubrious]? [hider=“Hey, c’mon, c’mon!”] [center] [img][/img] [img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/9ffc19df-aaa5-4d33-bdf6-27469894d6c9.png[/img] [color=orange][b]Name :[/b][/color] Terry Bogard [color=orange][b]Origin :[/b][/color] The King of Fighters [color=orange][b]Job :[/b][/color] Part-time employee [/center] [hider=Appearance] [img][/img] [center][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/505ce9b8-7f78-44af-9c49-8914a368fdad.png[/img][/center] Terry is a Caucasian man with toned physique and long blonde hair that he often keeps in a ponytail. He usually sports a casual getup consisting of a red sleeveless jacket with a large star emblem decking its back, a white shirt with torn sleeves, black biker gloves, blue vintage jeans, red-and-white sneakers, and a baseball cap of the matching color scheme. A logo written ‘Fatal Fury’ decks the white front of the cap, making it the most striking feature of his iconic outfit. [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Personality] [img][/img] Despite his rocky past, Terry is a charismatic, happy-go-lucky every man who’s easy to get along with just about anybody. Terry is playful and would often quip on his opponents during their matches. He never bears an ill-will towards anybody other than the murderer of his [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_Bogard]surrogate father[/url], [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Geese_Howard]Geese Howard[/url], and the outright malicious hitman, [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Ryuji_Yamazaki]Ryuji Yamazaki[/url]. A kindhearted man, Terry appears to be forgiving at times. Despite what Geese did to his father, he still takes his son, [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Rock_Howard]Rock Howard[/url], under his wing after the notorious kingpin chose to [i]abandon[/i] his family, attempting to bury the hatchet between them. [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Background] [img][/img] Following the brutal demise of his surrogate father at the hands of the notorious Geese Howard, Terry and his brother [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Andy_Bogard]Andy[/url] went on a decade-long training to exact their vengeance. Having learned chi-gathering techniques from the [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Hakkyokuseiken]Hakkyokuseiken[/url] school, Terry extended his training when he traveled across the States, partaking in street fights after street fights as well as learning new techniques along the way. Alongside Andy and Muay Thai champion [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Joe_Higashi]Joe Higashi[/url], he returned to South Town to enter the annual [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/The_King_of_Fighters_(tournament)]King of Fighters[/url] tournament hosted by Geese. Ultimately, the brothers successfully avenged the death of their father when Terry defeated Geese to become the new King of Fighters, kicking the latter off the top of his towering headquarters. Just a year later, Terry’s victory caught the attention of [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Wolfgang_Krauser]Wolfgang Krauser[/url], the earl of the wealthy Stroheim family. As Krauser took the King of Fighters tournament to the global stage, he invited Terry to participate alongside other martial artists across the globe. As it was the prior tournament, Terry managed to make the cut to the finals, facing the sponsor himself. The battle was intense, yet Terry managed to beat Krauser clean, as the entire world witnessed the champion defend his title. Following his consecutive victories, Terry and his comrades, Andy and Joe, received the invitation letters to the team-based King of Fighters ’94 tournament sponsored by [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Rugal_Bernstein]Rugal Bernstein[/url] while on a vacation in Italy. Sensing the possible involvements of Geese and Krauser, the trio decided to enter the tournament as [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Team_Fatal_Fury]Team Fatal Fury[/url]. Although they didn’t win the tournament, the team would continue to become the mainstay of every team-based King of Fighters to date. The members might’ve changed a couple of times, but Terry will always be present as the team leader. [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=In the Now] [img][/img] By the time the merging of universes took place, Geese had already been elected as the new mayor of South Town. Just a year into his mayoral term, he sponsored the sixteenth King of Fighters tournament in South Town, reverting the competition back to its original one-on-one format. Terry became one of the contestants, and after having to compete against former champions and fellow regular contestants, he’d made the cut to the finals. The battle exploded, as Terry faced the sponsor by the roof of [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Geese_Tower]Geese Tower[/url]. It was a brutal match, so to speak. Geese’s unusually offensive approach had left Terry battered, bruises and scars covering his face and biceps. It appeared that Geese had gotten a lot stronger since their last encounter, and Terry was unprepared for it. Just when Geese was about to finish him with a [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Raging_Storm]Raging Storm[/url], however, a miracle happened. A surge of energy engulfed Terry, as he utilized the remaining strength he had left in him. He flailed the ground as hard as he could, unleashing three rounds of [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Power_Geyser]Power Geysers[/url] in Geese’s direction. The geysers didn’t just manage to calm the Raging Storm, but also sent Geese flying out of the roof. Geese fell, but not until Terry held him by the hand, preventing his nemesis from falling further. Although in his weakest state, he tried as best as he could to pull Geese back to the roof, only for the latter to drag him along. Both men fell, seemingly plunging towards their ends. Unbeknownst to Terry, this was far from the end. A bizarre, new adventure had awaited him. Waking up, Terry found himself stranded in the middle of [url=https://ahatintime.fandom.com/wiki/Mafia_Town]Mafia Town[/url], his injuries intact and most of his past memories deleted. He didn’t know who he was and what he was. To make matters worse, a group of [url=https://ahatintime.fandom.com/wiki/Mafia_Goon]Mafia Goons[/url] jumped on him upon arrival, convinced he was one of the island’s old inhabitants they hadn’t gotten rid off. Thankfully, somebody came to his rescue, helping Terry deal with the goons. The rescuer introduced himself as “[url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Richard_Meyer]Richard[/url],” who believed to have seen Terry somewhere in the past. Learning about his critical condition, he brought Terry to his [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Pao_Pao_Cafe]Pao Pao Café[/url], letting him stay there until he was fully recovered. Eventually, he recruited Terry as his bouncer, having him protect the café from the Mafia Goons sent by the [url=https://ahatintime.fandom.com/wiki/Mafia_Boss]Mafia Boss[/url] to disrupt the rivaling restaurants. Several years had passed. Terry had begun to feel that something was [i]missing[/i] from him. He’d stayed in the Now for so long, yet he still hadn’t figured out who and what he was prior to the day he was discovered in Mafia Town. Knowing Terry’s fiery fighting spirit, Richard suggested he should go to Esaka, believing it might help him rediscover himself as a big tournament was about to be held there. Learning that the city was inhabited by fighters of his caliber, Terry decided to depart from Mafia Town to Esaka, trying to find himself again. [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Specialty] [img][/img] Terry is a proficient hand-to-hand combatant. He is a master of various martial arts disciplines, including boxing, karate, kungfu, kickboxing, street-brawling, and Hakkyokuseiken. This impressive feat allows him to easily adapt to other competitors, as well as giving him a much needed flexibility during a match. [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Inventory] [img][/img] [b]Duffel Bag :[/b] A large bag made of fabric that Terry always brings in his travels containing the following items: [list] [*] [b]Food and Water Supplies :[/b] Important supplies to prevent Terry from starving and thirsting in his travels. [*] [b]Additional Clothes :[/b] In case his current outfit gets stained or scathed as his adventure progresses. [*] [b]Map :[/b] The map helps Terry navigate through unfamiliar places within this strange, new world. [*] [b]Neo Geo Pocket Color :[/b] A retro handheld gaming console that Terry often plays in his pastimes. [/list] [img][/img] [/hider] [color=orange][b]Lv :[/b][/color] 9 [color=orange][b]EXP :[/b][/color] TBA [hider=Abilities] [img][/img] [list] [*] [b]Special Moves[/b] – Terry is capable of drawing ki-energy to create powerful attacks. He can shoot waves of energy dubbed the “[url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Power_Wave]Power Wave[/url]” or incorporate the said ki-energy to perform physical attacks such as the [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Terry_Bogard/Move_List]Burning Knuckle, Crack Shot, Power Dunk, Rising Tackle, Power Charge, etc.[/url] [*] [b]Desperation Moves[/b] – Stronger variations of special moves, Terry can create explosive attacks once pressured or close to running out of health. He can erupt geysers of energy dubbed the “Power Geyser” or shoot a massive spark of energy while performing the more physical [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Buster_Wolf]Buster Wolf[/url]. A fighting genius, Terry will often find ways to combine his special moves with/or desperation moves into a single, consecutive assault, such as [url=https://www.ssbwiki.com/Triple_Wolf]Triple Wolf[/url] and [url=https://streetfighter.fandom.com/wiki/Rising_Fang]Rising Fang[/url]. [*] [b]Advance Mode[/b] – While activating Advance Mode, Terry will strike a pose, as a golden energy flashes around him. This will increase the amount of damage his attacks could inflict, as well as helping him endure lesser impact from his opponent’s attacks. However, this mode wouldn’t last for too long, and by the time the flashing energy fades, his abilities revert back to normal. [*] [b]Extra Mode[/b] – While activating Extra Mode, Terry will take a stance, as he centers the surrounding energy around him. A blue, ever-illuminating aura will circle him, the more he charges himself with energy. Once sufficiently drawn, Terry can use the energy to execute one of his desperation moves against his opponent. [/list] [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Skills] [img][/img] [list] [*] [b]Enhanced Sense[/b] – Terry’s sharp instincts allow him to sense anybody nearby without having to look at them. [*] [b]Enhanced Durability[/b] – Terry is capable of receiving stiff punishing attacks and shrugging them off like they are nothing. This is proven to be helpful against brutes like Krauser and [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Grant]Grant[/url]. [*] [b]Enhanced Reflexes[/b] – Terry’s sharp reflexes allow him to dodge any attacks precisely. [*] [b]Survival Instinct[/b] – Growing up in the mean streets of South Town helps Terry develop a strong survival instinct that prevents him from whatever the possible dangers lurking within the city. He also possesses an extensive knowledge of what goes on in South Town, occasionally assisting his [i]partner[/i] [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/Blue_Mary]Blue Mary[/url]. in her investigations. [*] [b]Leadership[/b] – Terry possesses extensive experiences leading his very own Team Fatal Fury in the King of Fighters tournaments. [/list] [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Weaknesses] [img][/img] [list] [*] [b]Knockout[/b] – Like other fighters, Terry is prone to getting knocked out when he’s running out of health. When entering this state, he’ll remain unconscious for a while before having his health fully recovered. If the fight lasts more than a round, he’ll be recovered automatically upon entering the next round. [*] [b]Parry[/b] – Focusing on the offenses can often come with risks. Terry’s offensive approach to a fight often allows his opponent to parry his attacks on the spot—moreso, when he throws a punch, a kick, or executes a physical special move. When parried, his attacks will deal with little to no damage depending on the severity of them. [*] [b]Stun[/b] – Like other fighters, Terry is prone to getting stunned. This could happen when his opponent showers him with excessive rounds of attacks which he fails to counter. When entering this state, Terry will take a moment to regather his strength, dazed and unable to retaliate. Depending on the severity, it’ll usually take a moment until Terry is fully recovered. [*] [b]Tardy[/b] – Don’t expect Terry to come at time because, most likely, he won’t. It’s no secret that he’s one of the tardiest people in all of South Town. [url=https://snk.fandom.com/wiki/The_King_of_Fighters_XIII/Team_Stories#Fatal_Fury_Team]The best instance is when he reunited with his teammates for the King of Fighters XIII tournament.[/url] He came half an hour late to their rendezvous, much to Joe’s annoyance. [/list] [img][/img] [/hider] [hider=Spirits] TBA [/hider] [hider=Rapport] TBA [/hider] [hider=Additional Note] [img][/img] [list] [*] This version of Terry is based on his King of Fighters counterpart with some inspirations drawn from his original series, Fatal Fury, as well as its anime adaptations. [/list] [img][/img] [/hider] [/hider] [/quote] Wow, you were incredibly thorough when it came to providing sources / relevant links for extra background info and explanation. You also did a pretty good job with the In the Now section, intuiting what places in the World of Light are like. It's really a high-effort sheet, and 99% of it is great. I would only say that everything prior to Galeem's omnipocalypse should occur in the Background section, and that should only encompass canon events. Part of why I recommended waiting on the In the Now section is that everyone incarnates into the World of Light with the 'gleaming' status, which requires a touch extra explanation. People don't necessarily lose all their memories, just those related to Galeem and the world's end. They should still know who they are, they just don't exactly remember how they got here, and they're unable to recognize the 'wrongness' of the World of Light, almost like being in a dream. Because Mafia Town and Esaka are a really, really long way away, and most communities tend to be isolated, I would personally recommend transplanting the story about Richard and Pao Pao Cafe into Esaka itself, and maybe only having his time extend back a week or so rather than years. Does that sound alright?