[quote=@Terry Bogard] Thank you so much for the feedback! Took almost an entire day to write + format them lol. I have to say, the attaching external links bit was the trickiest of them all. I feel like it’s needed if anybody doesn’t know the characters, places, or other lore stuff I mentioned and wanted to learn more about them. And yes, I can move the Terry vs. Geese bit to the Background section, tho the problem is that it’s not exactly canon to the KOF lore—just something I wrote loosely based on [url=https://youtu.be/ax0TCWEEN2E?si=g4yUe8GEWDZb5VbT]Terry’s RB1 ending[/url]. It’s a similar finish with a bit of a twist (Geese dragging Terry along so he could continue fighting him in the [i]afterlife[/i], instead of knocking Terry’s hand away). Is it alright to include it to the Background section? As for Richard and his Pao Pao Café, actually, the main reason why I have them—including Terry—in Mafia Town is because Mafia Town is the closest I can get to South Town. Both are ruled by mobsters and known for their beaches, so I feel like Terry and the supporting cast of Fatal Fury could fit right in. But sure, it’s all good! I can move them to Esaka and have Terry be its resident for about a week since he’s brought to the World of Light. Also, I believe I just misunderstood the plot’s main premise a bit, so I’ll ditch the part where Terry forgets who he is. I’ll be working on the revision ASAP. Also, if it’s ok, I might wanna add one more piece of info in the Personality section. I feel like I should bring up Terry’s altruistic side while describing his kind-hearted quality. [/quote] You can include that in Background, and of course you can add to the personality section. Thanks for all the extra insight, and apologies for the misunderstanding.