[@Expllo]Thank you so much for the comments and feedback!

[hider=Vae'nra]
[b]Exsanguinate |[/b] Oh that makes perfect sense. I stole the concept from the ability Hemorrhage from DA2, I believe. It makes perfect sense that for higher enemies it would take more mana. 

[b]Blood bond |[/b] Oh yeah, again, makes perfect sense. It's basically Warding Bond from D&D or BG3, and I believe it works like that in those as well. I know OG warding bond I believe is invisible, but I pictured it as a thin like tether of blood between the people. It wouldn't be severed if someone passed through it though, but having the visual I thought added to the aesthetic and logic of the spell... kinda like siphoning blood and evenly dispersing it among the people tethered.

[b]Forestall the Fade |[/b] Thank you!! I remembered a cantrip I have in D&D called Spare the Dying which just stabilizes someone if they're knocked down. I really liked that concept and so I used that as inspiration.  

Thanks so much! :)[/hider]

[hider=Rasaad]
Thank you! I did realize he was more simple than Vae'nra but I feel like he'll really shine in RP. A warrior/barbarian tends to be more simple but he still has his quirks. 

I know his backstory is a little blad/textbook for the first half but I was trying to mirror the difference between his sense of self in the Qun and out. Because in the Qun it's all about the whole, not the individual. So it more just painted the bio of his life, but once he decided to turn from the Qun it all became more personal. If thank makes sense lol[/hider]

I appreciate you taking the time to give us your thoughts and critiques :) Can't wait to get into this RP!