[quote=@AndyC]
Like I said, I feel like the three different arcs don't fit together. My recommendation would be to drop the connection to the Exchange entirely since that one seems like more of a hindrance to what you want to do with the character, and then focus on him being in the region either to find his brother or figure out how to break the curse of the ghost-ring.
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okay, i did drop relations to The Exchange and just considered him "independent" since i don't feel like any of the other ones would suit him well, and i did make it both of his goals to find his brother and to find out how to break the curse of the Specter Ring and free the angry spirit from it