[quote=@Fiber]
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I like the concept, but because he is an orphan, please expand the worldview section to include a little more about how his magic works. What does he actually do work magic, how does he prepare himself? How does he think the world works, and what does he think is happening that lets him do this? DM if you need any more detailed advice

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I have edited and added the missing info. Is this good enough?