[@GreenGrenade] fantastic first post. We learn a lot about Ollie's current state of mind and the reluctant situation he has found himself in. I am fully looking towards seeing Ollie dtick it to the man in a situation where he's without his usual assets.

[@Silverstein] this is Katana, I hope she has my back. Your ability to write fluid and focused combat is enviable. The fight was beautifully described while maintaining the tension and urgency of the scene. Also loved the Scorpion reference.

[@Half Pint] A very thorough post and incredibly helpful for someone like me who didn't know what a Moleman was. I kept wanting to call him the Underminer but alas, I suppose the Underminer is an homage to Moleman. A great exposition driven post that brings back the sense of urgency and drives the post all while continuing to build this world.

[@Archangel89] another post that leaves me on the edge of my set and sets the stage for the Starheart to confront the Crimson Flame. I am looking forward to this fight.

[@Terry Bogard] Never expected to see Deathstroke take someone out for ice cream haha. Great first post, lots of action and really establishes for the reader how you see and want to portray Deathstroke. Looking forward to the next.

[@Sep] Tony seemingly dying, Rhodey's suit overridden, oh how the plot thickens. We've obviously talked at some length about this post given how interconnected our stories are in places. A great example of your writing and how well you are able to portray two distinct characters on their possibly worst day.

[@Half Pint] this may be your best postbyet. The suspense, the argument and the friction. A lot of insight into Johnny's and Ben's whereabouts. Great post, only thing I request is another.

[@Roman] & [@Pirouette] great collaboration, fun to see and team up between Spiders and I definitely enjoyed Ben's quipping. Looking forward to seeing the rest of each and reading how they take down the Vulture.