Thanks for understanding sport! Good luck with your other posts. I just did a writing marathon so I can use a breather. 

I'd have responded sooner, but I didn't want to do so before having my sheet finished "enough." I was going for an old boxing announcer vibe, but that indeed does sound a lot like the rock now that I see it. 

Also, I'm subscribed to this topic, so it isn't essential to keep mentioning me every time you post. You can keep doing it of course, it makes me feel extremely important when you do so. 

Aside from getting all of Mika's notes in order and adjusting some flavor text, I decided to ditch "The Final Lives of Stripes." A trio of free teleports that kick in just before you take damage in an RP where a single hit severely impacts a characters performance is a nice tool to have. But it didn't feel very fighting game esque to be able to instantly avoid all of Terry's supers, so I ditched it.