[@Skyguard]

No worries. Always open to give people a chance. Lemme know if you have questions or wanna discuss anything.

[@Duthguy]
So

A few things.

Notably his lenses. They basically read as just night vision binoculars or something? Because thats...not something super impressive to make. Something like that exists pretty easily, either through tech or Executables. You'd basically be going up to an inventor and saying you made a home made flashlight. Impressive, but not particularly something the institute would be interested in of itself. Now, if you can expand how you got these blueprints and maybe add a little something special to it, that might be a different story. Ancient tech is usually pretty hard to come by and any blueprints would likely be in the hand of private sellers/collectors/museums.

Secondly, the intent with Corythos was to create a somewhat more cyberpunk-ish society and vibe. Ideally, his Prosthetic would actually be useful for something. Maybe it has a wireless uplink or can connect with machines otherwise. Maybe it has a built in multitool for welding, soldering, etc, that kind of thing. Or maybe its just as simple as it gives him more physical strength or ability - but I would like a rough estimate of what it can do strength wise if so and if he has any other implants that could aid with helping his organic body lift otherwise impossibly heavy things.

Thirdly, I would like you to expand on his family a bit more. You say they were poor and pressured to give him a prosthetic, yeah? That would likely mean they were approached by someone from the Church of Synthesia Convergence. Or maybe the bought into the whole religion themselves. I would just like a bit of expanding here on the characters backstory in question.

basically, the main thing is really I just want you to expand a bit more on a few aspects here.