[@Birdboy]
At the moment, there are several reasons for why I cannot accept your character.

1. Neither your civilian faceclaim/picture, nor your hero form image,are showing up - [i]and[/i] you left the 'Description' field blank - meaning I have no idea what your character looks like.

2. As Uiop said, you've chosen the "Defender" archetype for your hero, yet you've made them appear to be more of a frontline fighter/tank. Which is what the "TAnker" archetype is. Your abilities, while not being unacceptable on their own, also does not seem to particularly favor the "buffing" or "debuffin" mechanics and style of the Defender-archertype. Now granted, archetypes are just guidelines, and people are free to slap whatever powers they want down in their list, but it seems odd to choose a class and then try to make it like another one, when that other class already exists.

3. Your supplementary power should be void of any powers, this is stated in the Example Character Sheet. Furthemore, the powers described in there should be part of your primary power, as it is the magic sword taht bestows those abilities and boons onto your character, not some random, outside, unrelated force or reason.

4. Your character's weaknesses. In particular, the one that invovles the sentient sword judging its wielder to be 'worthy'. As you've given no information on the "personaltiy" or "Ideology" of this enchante sword, there's no way for me, as a GM; to make use of this weakness and instead it is left entirely up to your discretion. While I like to give people the benefit of the doubt to not power-game or abuse trust, I do also like to have tangible ways to actually have my NPCs actually being able to impact your character negatively.

5. Civilian skills. While not an issue in any way, shape or form on its own, its the phrasing and implication of the skill. The way you've written it makes it sound like every single hero and villain in Paragon City has their own comic books, animated TV series, web-wikis, merch and social media feeds. This is not the case. There are [i]plenty[/i] of obscure heroes and villains who the general public don't know anything about in the city. Only the "big names" make it to stardom and public recognition. For much of the rest, most superheroes are just trated as third-party police officers or rescue services, with most civilians having no idea what their hero-name is.

6. On a personal level, I feel like Dermont's reasoning and rationale for moving to Paragon City and becoming a hero is a bit lacking. He basically found a talking sentient sword during an outdoors roleplaying session, ditched the entire event mid-session and then just up and left to go be a hero in another city, without any sort of mention of his motivations or feelings or reasons for it. He just [i]did[/i] it. Why? Because he found a magic sword that talks and gave him cool powers? Wouldn't a [i]nerd[/i] be more inclined to keep using the blade for LARP'ing or to sit at home, in their parents' basement, and interview and try to talk and interogate their new "friend" on their past and powers and other things? It all seems so... Sudden... And forced. This last point isn't a deal breaker or anything, it just feels - to me - a bit like, other than him having admiration for heroes and villains, Dermont doesn't really have a reason for going to Paragon City, other than "I just gained magic powah! Better rool into PC I guess!".

And there you have it. While some of the above points are mere personal thoughts and opinions on the sheet, there [b][i]are[/i][/b] issues with it that, for the time being, prevents Dermont from being accpeted into the RP.

You're welcome to address or debate these concerns f course and try again if you so wish.