Okay, bio time~

[@Pyromania99] Looks good to me, accepted

[@Dark Light] There's… quite a bit here that still needs work, starting with the [i]picture[/i]; using an official piece of art from something else is strange enough, but it doesn't even fit the notion of a half high-elf. The imp doesn't even [i]have[/i] a picture, but you've never asked in detail about demons, so that's probably for the better.

But for the most part? The character concept is just full of ideas that haven't been fully pulled together. Who's his father and does that tie into anything else going on? What was his mother running from? Why did things burn down? Why, when everything was on fire and presumably people are being killed, does he have a "special sword"? I'd also add that a court mage is [i]not[/i] a position that's going to be treated like a common servant and replaceable, because it's [i]not[/i] something any old person can fill – it wouldn't stop mistreatment, but it wouldn't be "treated like peasant scum" because then you find yourself without a mage. Or on fire.

Abilities and equipment section is really barebones. Why is the sword special? What sort of curses? If he's an enchanter, why doesn't have have anything he's enchanted? It's really odd.

[@SilverPaw] Couple of things, mostly pretty minor:

[quote]Never mind that he had an elder, more competent sister, for tradition dictated heirs be male[/quote]

Nooooot true in this setting; inheritance is equal, so it would go to the eldest regardless.

The term for a casting implement is a catalyst, but that's just informational. What's really odd about the equipment is… uh, why a machete? Why is his backup a farming implement of all things? It's a bit… odd to have as a "just in case" thing, the deep forest isn't something you really wander into by accident, and it just jars with his whole noble vibe.

Main thing though is whether we could reduce the personality overlap just a bit somehow? Two guys with basically the same personality [i]is[/i] a bit uncanny.