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[@SilverPaw] Couple of things, mostly pretty minor:

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Nooooot true in this setting; inheritance is equal, so it would go to the eldest regardless.

The term for a casting implement is a catalyst, but that's just informational. What's really odd about the equipment is… uh, why a machete? Why is his backup a farming implement of all things? It's a bit… odd to have as a "just in case" thing, the deep forest isn't something you really wander into by accident, and it just jars with his whole noble vibe.

Main thing though is whether we could reduce the personality overlap just a bit somehow? Two guys with basically the same personality [i]is[/i] a bit uncanny.
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Oh, equal opportunity, nice. And yeah, the equipment section was me being 'what the heck do I put here...hmm...', anyhow altered that and the sister tidbit in the bio.

As for the personity, that depends. I know Calben has a similar vibe, but to me, they're two very distinct characters. Regardless, I trimmed what I felt were the most suspect sentences in the personality section. The whole bio is pretty darn tied into some core traits tho, so if that feels too close...Honestly, at that point I'd need to rework the entire concept, which is far from a  minor change.