[quote=@Lugubrious]
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Looks quite good overall! I have just a couple notes.
-My eyes aren't so good and the shade of purple you've chosen is dark enough to blend in to the guild's background for me. I can just highlight it in order to read it, but it is a slight inconvenience
-At level 4 your starting EXP max should be 40
-At first glance, Grima seems limited in what she can do, since I assume she can't just summon her building-sized dragon form and blast everything to smithereens with an apex spell willy-nilly. Especially for stuff that strong, I would prefer to define specifics and limiting factors like cooldown times or mana costs. Her sword skills offset this somewhat, but I still think it would be a good idea to maybe start with a weaker and more generally usable dark magic and work up to an ultimate magic
-What sword does she have? I'd say to put it in her Inventory section
-I assume she's in Esaka in order to seek intelligence on her true form in order to find and release it? How does this play into her joining a tournament? And which tournament is she joining? Right now, I'd say that Mortal Kombat and King of Fighters have enough participants, so I'd encourage her joining World Warrior since it's the biggest and probably needs the most participants
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To address each point in order:
-Understood with the coloring. I wanted to use a purple but too dark overall to use, though I will take a look around to see if I can find a brighter version (or just bite the bullet and have Grima be uncolored)
-I can certainly work with something like a cool down for their apex spell, or have it be a MASSIVE drain on Grima's energy and leaves her vulnerable for s good while after using it.
-I forgot to add the sword but I was going wirh a basic iron sword
-I was working with the idea that Grima was in Esaka to gather intelligence to find her true form, and was planning to win a tournament in order to acquire influence that she could use as leverage (if not to gather intelligence than just to gather power). As for tournaments, I am perfectly fine with her joining the World Warrior shenanigans.

Will update everything on the sheet once I have properly woken up ^.^