[@Tesserach] With Leofric, we were wondering why he was recruited as a six year old?  It's also from a country quite a long way from where the order is doing its thing.  Was it you were intending he went to work as a page for an Order Knight?  I'm guessing it's that... but just wanted to clarify!
Other than that the app is fine.

[@PrinceAlexus]  App looks fine, and I trust you as a writer but it would be nice to chuck in a bit more backstory if you can think of some?  It would be cool to hear a bit more about the Scalefolk, how their lives are and some significant events in Vash's life.

[@Nach] looks grand overall.  If you want to add something about why they're here in Eohamingas, rather than in the North, that would be cool.

[@Pragia12] Looks fine I guess - I'll accept it :P