[quote=@Neziul]
[@Rhona W]

When was the Dranfel home world rendered uninhabitable relative to the start of the game? Would a younger member of their species have no concept of a home planet at all? Or was it a more recent thing?
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I had in mind it was many generations ago, and their original world is something of a passed-down tale among the current generations. Maybe some of the very oldest Dranfel might remember it, but the younger ones would see it only as a story and something that exists in pictures. Their 'home world' would be the world(s) that the Dranfel settled on subsequently.

[quote=@Cozure]
[@Rhona W]
Here is my character sheet. Let me know if anything needs changing to fit the lore, anything that I might've overlooked.
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All looks good to me so far - you don't need to have any special abilities necessarily if you don't want to. Happy to Approve him if you want to post in the Characters tab - although, please format the sheet accordingly when you do.

[quote=@Foster]
The MAS sounds like ye olde Scopedog.
-I'll need to remember to make a note to pack a spare change of clothes (or at least a field-cloak) in storage in case she needs to abandon the MAS.

Felix is probably going to be biased against elves for reasons unmentionable in polite company, but will 'tolerate' augmented paranormal humans to the point of defending them.

As for herself, she'll likely be the result of anhur attempts at genetic modification to combine the best traits of multiple races, but largely inherited none of the positive traits aside from being the black-fur covered swan of the batch. That and being nearly wingless. Whether that story is true or not is another matter, but it's the one she sticks to when questioned on it; and listing her as an anhur makes it easier to tick a checkbox than to list her as 'other' and write a whole first-contact form.
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The Scopedog was definitely an inspiration, although I have never seen any VOTOMs anime or read the manga, I am well aware of it (as any good mecha enthusiast should be).

I'm fine if your character is biased against elves, but do let me know as GM why, so I can be aware of it and incorporate it into the narrative appropriately. 
The genetic manipulation background is fine too; there's certainly enough precedent for it given the amount of it going on in the setting as a whole. 

I have also updated the Oth post with details on the standard MAS Suit your characters will all be used, and the options for their loadouts. 

I'll put together a character sheet for myself as soon as I can soon - but every time I've sat down to do some writing for this so far this weekend, I've been hit with 'could you just help me with...' of course xD