[@enmuni][@Theyra] These both look great! [@PrinceAlexus] Could you please weave in some character traits/motivations into the backstory to give us an idea of what this guy is like? Otherwise its fine. [@Tesserach] From the Co-OP discussion the 'cash-for-tots' stuff feels like its from a more cynical world rather than a mythic heroic fantasy we're leaning into. If there's an understanding both ICly and OOCly that going to serve with the Orders leads to a better life and the payment to the family is to recompense them for the lost labour then we're okay with it. We are breaking with the modern George R R Martin tradition of a crapsack fantasy world and going back to the Old Master!