[@RevNorv]
Like the app.  What we're wondering about is what, exactly do you want Ardashir to be able to do?  We just want to be sure he isn't outside of the broad power level of other characters.


[@InfamousGuy101]
Overall we like the app but there's a few things we aren't super keen on.

Breath of Eruherion - Eruherion is the deity.  Why would they worship its breath?  The Prathmava aren't supposed to be a primitive/superstitious people: they've just chosen not to settle. They come across as quite superstitious in some of what you have written, particularly around the curse (which isn't an actual curse?) though I am open to this being a particularly superstitious tribe that Jair comes from.

As for the powers of Jair's horse.  It's a bit much.  From a mechanical perspective I don't want the healing involved as it diminishes the role of healing characters, such as the [@enmuni]'s character.  I'm also not keen on the 'whispering storm' stuff - it looks like a Fomorian power set: those are the baddies.  It also takes away from the distinctiveness of magical characters.  If you stick to it being a faster, stronger, intelligent horse with a supernatural, psychic bond to Jair, that's cool.