[quote=@ActRaiserTheReturned]
I got this idea for magic from "Masters Of The Five Magicks"
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I am not really comfortable with directly pawing/plagiarizing Magic frameworks from other books. I saw that you made come changes but that's just paraphrasing in the end. 

Wizardry is the most changed from the original, but that is also in essence just the 'Rune Language' trope, which to be honest I don't mind having in this setting, if you can flesh it out more. 

I am also sure that Alchemy and Artifice (which is what the Magick you have described basically is) can also be implemented if you can incorporate them into a new framework that would be unique to this setting.