[quote=@Cmmelody] It's perception and corruption. I can edit my entry for less confusion. btw are those domain okay with you? [/quote] Well, honestly, now that I've had a more thorough look at it, no. Your two domains feel like they're from entirely different deities. Perception (awareness, sight, hearing, sensory truth) has no organic thematic connection to Corruption (moral decay, transformation, degradation). The roleplay example focuses almost exclusively on corruption/temptation—perception barely appears except as flavor text about "hearing cries." Additionally, claiming Yzechr invented sight and hearing is staggeringly huge and creates immediate worldbuilding contradictions. Were all other gods blind and deaf before this one arrived? [i]"Can hear every crying voice in the world and respond no matter how far away"[/i] is a campaign-destroying power level if taken literally. Refer to my addendum about divine omniscience that I posted earlier to understand, in broad terms, the power levels of deities in this setting. Your motivation says Yzechr wants to protect the damned, but the roleplay example describes them as "the cruelest entity in the realm...who preys on the weak." These are opposite concepts. A predator doesn't protect anyone, it instead consumes everything in its path. If Yzechr is genuinely trying to save people, the framing should reflect that. If Yzechr is cruel and exploitative, own that and adjust the motivation. Lastly, your list of followers mixes people who make sense (outlaws, outcasts, rebels) with professions that feel totally wrong. Artists? Why would artists worship a corruption deity? Unless you mean desperate artists (starving poets who'd sell their souls for fame), this feels random. Scouts and watchmen? These are often lawful, disciplined professions. Why would they abandon moral principles? The "perception" domain connection is there, but it doesn't fit the corruption angle. A bit of specificity would fix these issues; "Disgraced artists," "exiled scouts," "watchmen who've seen too much and lost faith in the law," are more fitting followers for such a deity.