[@Vec] Those are some really good criticisms, thank you for addressing's these. I defiantly felt like I was playing a little too much into the war aspect of her character and left the music aspect of her as some flavoring. Sorry about the world breaking desire. It felt a little cliche even to me, but I didn't know exactly what else a goddess of war could desire. Alright let me change a few things to make it fit much better lol.

So instead of being the goddess of music along with war, what if she was the goddess of sacrifice instead. Then her new desire would be "She desires that every sacrifice, heroic or tragic, noble or desperate, be witnessed, honored, and remembered." I hope that's a lot better from before and less agonistic. For the final concern about compassion versus desire contradiction, I think that's settled since I am leaning more into a compassionate goddess of war. 

I'll start editing my character sheet to fix the problems, is there any other concerns or suggestions you want to make? I am always happy to take some ideas!