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Can I add a little lore to the Kore Soteira? I feel like the one I wrote before isn't detail enough.

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[b][u]Life and custom in Soteira:[/u][/b]
Since the first landing in 2158, people here have been contending with the extreme environment of this planet. The first settlers would rely heavily on life support technology and live only in the highly closed off base. Over time, they would slowly adapt to the planet’s gravity and temperature, and once the new generation was born they know something special happens. The newly born of Kore Soteira has significantly denser bone structure than the regular earth born one. So as harsh as it may sound, the plan to slowly reduce life support operations on Kore Soteira slowly began. The primary reason is to cut the cost of planet’s upkeep even lower, but the second and more secretive reason is an attempt from the USF to study the change in human biology under another planet’s influence, with the hope of making subspecies of human that would be suitable for each and other planet in the future.

Kore Soteira is a recent settlement. For most of its time, it has had a very sparse population consisting mostly of the USF officers, quantum computer managers and engineers, and careers in support of the USF base operation. Just less than ten years ago others such as biogenetic experts, tourists, and the second generation started adding to the pool of citizens, changing it to a true nation with its own culture rather than just another government’s base of operation.

Most cities still had a population in the unit of thousands, which revolved around the USF base as a center. The further you go from the base center, the less like earth it will become, with more harsh temperature and gravity. Visitors can only live in the base, requiring rigid training and endurance tests before they can be allowed to wander outside of the safe zone. The bases themselves are located under a thick layer of ice that melts only in summertime, transforming to the underwater base. It is said that within a hundred years, the population of Kore Soteira might change enough to be able to swim in the ocean without a life supporting suit.

The most important time of the year for people living here is, of course, the summer. It is when the ice melts into water and most crops can grow without relying on too much expensive technology. Their most important festivals include ‘The Last Snow Festival’ which celebrates the coming of summertime, and ‘The Lost Month’ which is the time when Soteira orbits outside the heat zone, thus making it too cold for most people to work, it is also their planetary holiday month.
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Alright, should be fine now to edit yourself now. Don't use [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mJpJzV1pZZqHbICQC20rZY43G11k9r-DNFQu_qX2bNw/edit?usp=sharing]Google Docs[/url] as much, so for some reason, thought you'd be able to edit regardless lol