[quote=@Tywell] [hider=Gray the grey man]Name: Gray the grey man [s]Archibald Gramen[/s] Age:58 Sex: male Appearance: Gray is titled correctly as the only thing he is ever seen wearing is a grey trench coat and fedora. Under the trench coat he wears a grey suit with a white undercoat and grey tie. Gray has short hair not buzzed per say but close to his head and of course his hair is grey. He has two pistols that he wields one called Blackburner a normal bullet pistol with the exception of its black and goldish (actually is pyrite but most people don't realize that) coloring and Whiteweal a cristol pistol with a white and blue colaration to it. Brief Background: before he became the grey man he was Archibald Gramen a simple man who was over worked doing monotonous jobs for people until he became more or less a husk of a man. This was until the town he lived in was raided. In the attack Archibald took a pistol from one of the shops in town (what would eventually be whiteweal) and shot down a couple of the raiders and picked up one of their pistols (Blackburner) and fled into the desert. He was out in the desert for a week only surviving on by hydrating himself by drinking the hallucinogenic juice of the special cactus that surounded his town. The combination of dehydration, hallucinations, and the fact the he was a husk of a person made him into what he is now. While out in the desert the gun he had taken from the store in his town became bleached because of the sun and took on the look that it does now as Whiteweal. Out in the desert he began to think of his hallucinations as visions stripping him of his identity as Archibald and making him Gray. Along with this new identity he also took up the world view that in existence the thing that truly matter was nothing and absence. He became a nihilistic person who seemed stripped of anything that made him a person. When he found civilization after wondering through the desert he began to take on jobs and use that money to train himself to be stronger and a more deadly shot. He eventually found and killed the people who raided his town, but this only made him feel more empty inside. To try to combat this he continued to try and tmake other peoples goals so as to not feel so empty. Now in his older age he is considered a force to be reckoned with as a veteran mercenary. Strengths: Athletic: despite his age Gray is in peak physical condition. Gunslinger: Gray's skills with a gun are incredible and many consider him a very a very reliable choice when in need to shoot someone. Test of Charachter: Gray is very good at telling what kind of person someone is even without speaking to them. Weaknesses: Language: Gray has a problem with talking to people. He is a terrible negotiater and generally tries not speak at all other then the odd "yes" "no" "accomplished" Memory: Gray has major problem with his memory with the only thing he can consistently remember is the job he is on. Reality: He has a hard time telling falsehoods from reality and can even some times see visions in the middle of nowhere.[/hider] [/quote] Not bad, I think needs fine-tuning, though. I'm at my day-job, but asap I'm open to working with you in the pm's, what do you think?