[@DocTachyon] 
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What the hell?! That was so cool. I loved the imagery, and the overall idea of the train was so inspired and I loved the way you created the mythology behind it. I really felt like I was watching a movie for this, it was so very visual and the first person narration really centered everything for me to feel so involved and present there. I enjoyed the POV swap, and seeing how Vigilante and Blade perceive each other and already they feel so lived in in the way that you write them. Looking forward to more of this.

I am vampire obsessed so this was just a complete delight to read and tonally different to the other stories going on in AOC. The living carriage was fucking disgusting and I loved it. 
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[@Melissa] 
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More Wanda posts please! Another really enjoyable entry to your Scarlet Witch, I love the bond of the twins and liked your choice to play out what happened through their debriefing of it. Pietro is a great voice of reason against Wanda's more intuitive and heart based guidance. I'm so excited to see where you take them and how you will unpack their past with Sinister especially as I have pieces on that same board too.... I am just stoked to see this Scarlet Witch :D
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[@Lord Wraith] 
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I continue to love this Clark so much. 

>Clark soared free from the prying eyes of the media, otherwise known as his coworkers.

He feels so fleshed out already, and I enjoy reading a character who us just so morally good. His doubts over whether he did the right thing with Volcana make him so compelling and I look forward to how you continue to unpack this and hoping I can get some collab action with you on this, if not with Emma then a member of the Mutant Council for sure. The Mutants having an ally in Superman is such a boon to them. Of course it wouldn't be a Wraith post without a sexy redhead also, I like Lisa a lot :D  
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[@Pacifista] 
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TWO BRUCE POSTS MERRY CHRISTMAS TO MEEEE. Ross was such an ass to Bruce and Rick first of all lol! Bruce surviving what he survived. Ross "You're a mess". I'm so curious about Rick, and I really liked that Bruce still looked out for him and wanted to keep him close. Very curious about Tala as well as I don't know a lot about her but she seems like trouble and I liked the way you described and introduced her. With the second one, Betty really stole the show for me and learning more about her and her history with Bruce was a great glimpse at what is to come. AND THEY KISSED!
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[@rocketrobie2] 
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A literal Christmas post! Welcome to the RP first of all and what a great post. I find the banter between all of the characters involved in the con really amusing which builds to the rapport they have and their starting point in the RP too. It was just funny and refreshing; I also have no idea who this character is, so I'm looking forward to you playing out your goals for him as a villain to hero - I am keen to see what happens with the score from this truck. It's feeling like a strong origin story so far. 

This interaction in particular made me lol 

> “I’m sweating like a wh- lady of the evening in a church wearing all this. Sorry Pierre.” 

“No worries Henry, just glad you caught yourself. Shelia’s actually the show stopper now. Roll her out when they got big money comin-“

“What’s it matter if he says the ‘W’ word anyway? Shelia’s a stripper not a lady of the evening.” Roger interjected, beginning to strip out of his Santa costume.
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[@Colonel Sep] 
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Ahhh you called back. Loved the opener and the I Am Hopeful section especially. I like my heroes hopeful and I like me heroes heroic which she really is in the sequence with Jackie where she saves her life. I love that she is bold and speaks with the authority she has, and the continuous hatred/confusion over the mortal weapons and also THORS AAAAAXE. (I had to copy and paste that to read it haha)
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[@Roman] 
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Like we already said, the references to other characters through the artifacts is so clever and I got a kick from reading it. I wonder if there is any meaning to it? Or just a fun Easter egg. Can they be used perhaps to bring characters in to the House? I think you are very deliberate in how you write so I'd expect it to have something meaningful behind it. Who knows really but I'm keen to read more of Hellblazer. Your prose is really powerful here in the way that it builds confusion of the time and space and I thought the last paragraph with the words pecked out was just so fucking cool. Urgh. I wish I thought of that!!
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