[quote=@RickyG85] [@Ikan] nice post, well worth the wait! I really felt the tension. I'd meant to imply that it was your character peaking out from an open manhole, but I can edit that out before my next post. I need to reread the other post as well, aiming to get the next post up before the end of the week! [/quote] Oh...sorry I didn't catch that! :'D but I'm glad if my submission is fine!