[@Shovel]

Before I approve, I need clarification on a few points:

1. Show me Amut.
You've demonstrated First Cephalopod's voice vividly. Can you write a comparable example post from Amut's perspective? I need to understand how the two differ and whether Amut has the same interior depth.

2. The black whale tension.
In your example, First Cephalopod fears black whales—has been hunted and maimed by them. But Amut is a black whale. Is this intentional? I would like to know what's the [b]actual[/b] relationship between your two entities, not just the meta one that pertains to conviction mechanics. Predator and prey? Two halves that haven't yet recognized each other? As I understand it, they are responsible for different parts of the ocean and thus we'll see little interaction between them. Do correct me if I am wrong.

3. Collaboration with other gods.
Your solo writing works beautifully, but this is a collaborative game. Gods negotiate, debate, form alliances; if Orranoth descended to the sea seeking to parley, how would your entities participate? How do beings that think in sensory impressions rather than language engage in pantheon politics?

Answer these and I think we're good to go. The concept isn't a problem, I just need to see the complete picture before accepting them.