[quote=@ActRaiserTheReturned] [center]Jamie Muggridge[/center] [b]Gender[/b] Male [b]Age[/b] 40 [b]Appearance[/b] https://imgur.com/a/QnNFBbf [b]Personality[/b] Jamie studies and works often, is seen as charismatic occasionally and strives to be respectful of the world around him at all times. Sometimes he talks too much, and that annoys other people to no end. [b]Nationality[/b] He was born in Arizona, and is an American citizen though his mother was born in the UK. [b]Education[/b] education here [b]Former Occupation[/b] Architect [b]Skills[/b] He had five years in college in the US, and has been an architect for ten years. He knows how to build, and knows first AID. [b]What you were doing last before falling asleep[/b] He was going over his schematics for a new building. [b]Where you wake up at[/b] London, England (Or whatever it's called in 2700 BC) [b]Background[/b] Jamie was born in 1985 in Phoenix, Arizona, and for the first twenty years or so he was happy. This man had good grades in school, was noticeably an "over achiever" for most of that time. At twenty two, he began to experience bad times. He lost most of his living from bogus law suits and his relationship with his fiance, Maria, failed. For the next five years he struggled to keep a roof over his head and for the next five years after that he only managed to scrimp and save a little bit more for himself. By his mid thirties though he was very successful and a new fiance, Donna. Life was good until he suddenly appeared in the past, all those millenia ago. [b]Goals/Plans[/b] To create a long lasting civilization. Maybe by first establishing trade routes through the rest of Europe. [b]Why you picked your location[/b] There is a lot of mineral and agricultural wealth there. [b]Character Motivations[/b] First things first, he just needs to survive and make some friends before he's suddenly their leader. [b]Playing Yourself or Custom Char[/b] Custom [/quote] So, the education part needs to be filled in, and for skills. I would like it if you could actually list the skills he has, rather than say he went to college, and what his job was. As for the background, I would like a bit more to it, like one more paragraph at least. So fix these, and I will review it again.