Just a half round of words and thoughts on some of the recent IC 😊
More to come this weekend!

[@Captain Uni] [hider]
Your Moon Knight run continues to inspire me; watching someone write a character they connect with and have love for makes it all the more special to read the work. Not only are your posts really nice to look at, with the way you select colour and fonts to add emphasis to moments, but the actual plot itself continues to hit.

I am deeply enjoying the different stories happening in Odyssey, and MK is one of my favourites for just how off-the-wall it is, and my lack of knowledge of the character (which I think I’ve said before) makes it all the better to read because this gets to be MY Moon Knight. I am enjoying all of the different and distinct personalities of MK and I’m starting to really get a feel for it all. Issue 3 had so much action and I commend how you’re able to continue to build this up. GET TO THE  MOON.

I loved the way Issue 4 picks up RIGHT where 3 left and it’s clear we’re in the mind and in Marc’s past watching his father. It’s so cinematic in how you wrote it and I’m excited for you to keep going. It’s such a fresh concept and you make it work really well :) Can’t wait for number 5!

As we move through I just thought this was a slick transition:


> Jake pinches the bridge of his nose in embarrassment and takes in a breath, and then Marc looks back at her with a wince.

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[@Colonel Sep] [hider]
A very exciting entry into Sif’s arc with the arrival of Juggernaut. Oh my I wonder what will happen here? 🤔😉

I so enjoy reading your combat sequences, they have so much punch and vibrancy to them and Juggernaut made me crack up in this and I was 100% picturing Vinnie Jones, you characterised him really well in such a short moment within the post and gave him a big energy that is equally matched just as well by how commanding and fierce that Sif is which is something I continue to enjoy you get into.
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[@Lord Wraith] [hider]
Alert alert, one of my favourite songs by my favourite bands just dropped in the post! 

LOVED this Clark flashback - I keep prattling on about it but I just love how wholesome Clark is, swooning over his kiss; such a sweet visual to think about, him smiling like a big dumb dork. I like when you write Clark like this. I never really got into Smallville but I can see how it really influenced you with the focus on the school and small town kind of vibes. It just feels like a really cute movie until it doesn’t and we get the background lore into Clark and Lionel.

I liked his brief moment of confusion as well here;

> His lungs should have been burning by now. But Clark barely felt winded. He chalked it up to adrenaline before the roof of the car in his hands suddenly peeled back like the top of a can of beans. Clark barely had time to register what he had done before he pulled the man from the wreckage. 

Then when we move into the present, seeing Clark and Lex in such a friendly way is just… Ahhhh! Your dialogue always shines through and even though Lex and Clark are friends you can feel that tension beginning when they have differing views on Volcana but he’s able to win him down by bringing up Project Everyone. And of course, the potential Frost link up just makes me very excited!

The next Superman post really plays with that tension again in the flashback with the mistake of the gift, until it’s flipped. You always have the feeling of the social power imbalance between Clark and Lex. 

Lois continues to dominate her scenes 😀


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Green Arrow, Hulk, Daredevil, Batman, Iron Fist to continue with!