[@Cyrania] I dig the changes, the Soviet like Martians that are still alive and not possessing the exact powers of MM are intriguing (I'd love to make a few Black Circle members off world Martians), but I did have some questions. If your MM can shapeshift, being locked into the superhero form when in Martian mode doesn't make much sense. Couldn't he just assume a different form entirely and still use the meta-Martian abilities as a hero? And why would Soviet style Martians need to create a superhero if the species is seen as perfect and without crime? Also, on this alternate Earth of ours aliens are more feared in general by this world's governments; Superman's legal papers are constantly questioned in the media thanks to President Luthor. Aside from all that I'd just give the character a new name for he and his brother to make it yours. Hell you could pull an Invincible and keep the J'onn alias but then make him this universe's shapeshifting Plastic Man. But yeah, call him J'imm J'kson or something. [@Sanity43217] I love this sheet too, he sorta reminds me of the comic version of Savitar. I really dig the constantly moving thing, and transferring speed in combat through his style of fighting, as well as the ricochet aspect. I'd only ask if you could tweak two things. Again, this character is badass and yours... give him another civilian name and arch enemy. The other thing is the skull helmet. Since that's my guy's schtick you think your creepy speedster could wear a mask like guy from the Black Phone? Creepy face with horns essentially? [hider=Creepy guy mask] [img]https://i.imgur.com/yJb1U1G.png[/img][/hider] _________________________ We get a few more sheets like these two and we'll be in business. Rather than some form of Justice League forming in this universe, with a vampire Batman lurking around we could be more like the Shadowpact, JL Dark, or the Outsiders.