[@Birdboy] I'm happy with it, but if you want to hold off on posting it till [@Taka] is done, I understand.

I won't hold you to a personality section if you don't want to. I never include it as uh, my characters tend to decide their personalities once I start writing.

The only note I have on the [i]history[/i] is if Rebel High Command sent them out to bring Tyrell back, it wouldn't be as a rescue since the planet was locked down almost immediately after 'his' arrival. Could you adjust it so she was sent to meet up with a local rebel cell, who would pick up Tyrell keep him safe and then send him back aboard?