[quote=@silver21] Also trying out writing in the present tense. Wish me luck y'all 😆 [/quote] I will also need that luck, considering most other things I'm writing atm are in past tense LOL. Also! I think I've figured out a way to write three characters w/o losing my sanity. it's a good opportunity to stretch my third-person omniscient muscles, which is great bc I'm p sure I almost always default to limited third-person and Idk how to break out of it 😔 (I'm p sure my post is exactly this but oh well. I'll try again next time.) [quote=@Birdboy] I don't mind to take her over at some point, but especially for this first adventure it's nice if she is out.[/quote] rip ragatha no one wants her fr 😭 /j also it's so cool that you actually get to see the impact your cooking has on people! :O they be getting that five-star retirement life