[quote=@Sleepy Tani]
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I loved your post! The way you portrayed her emotional state during that was great, kept me engaged and interested. Give yourself more credit.😊
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You're too sweet! <3 As an ESOL teen [i]quite[/i] some time ago, I've always been a bit self-conscious with my writing.