[@JFK] The things I need to see before I can approve:

1. A title which meets the criteria outlined on the previous page. If "old man in a young man's game" is supposed to be it, it's missing anything resembling an inciting incident.
2. Two of your Ilks are basically epistemologically identical. Completely redundant. (Granted it's a good one, so just condense them and that's one thing done.)
3. I asked for justification re: unusual skillsets. Nothing wrong with the character being a handgun "enthusiast" but I need to know whether that means he's just an antiques collector, an avid shooter, or what. And if he's some kind of crack marksman then i need a convincing rundown on how he became one of those. 

What you do provide i enjoyed. Sensible backstory, plausible niche within the criminal ecosystem, compelling motivations and dilemma at the heart of him. Just take another pass and this time give the app criteria a bit more scrutiny.