[@Animal]: Marisa makes this a little jarring but I overall don't see anything wrong here. Though, female dwarves are beardless in the setting, so using a bearded disguise might draw more attention as opposed to less? [@Rune_Alchemist]: Just like before, nothing wrong here. [@Silver Carrot]: Ingvarr are a viking-esque race. They were directly inspired by draphs from Granblue Fantasy as far as appearances go, so if you want to get a good idea of how they look that would probably help. Physically powerful, culturally emphasizing bold and honorable combat. They have a clan-based society and while there [i]is[/i] a High King in Barukstaed both human and Ingvarr clans have a lot of pull there. Surnames are taken from a great feat of an ancestor, so it'll be things like Serpentslayer, Bearbreaker, that sort of thing. They have their own pantheon as well, though it's shared by Barukstaedian humans. For a Witch Apprentice, there's a lot that Rain and I would need to talk to you about so if you want to do that I'd like you to PM us.