Heyo- sorry I haven't jumped back in yet! I've been working on this and will be hopefully getting something posted tomorrow! 

It's been a little while since I read the first book, so I'm okay with how you wrote them. Maybe we could upkeep a little micro description about stuff like 'places' too? 

LOVE the bit with the sodas- it was really a good touch. I'd be interested to see if someone got a soda media deal or something. I'm thinking of like Taco Bell promos with stickers of the crawlers in their 'powered up' hero poses haha. 
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Omg! Glad to hear you like them, I wish I'd known so I could dodge it for ya lol! I'll leave these silly guys as my only arachnid variety.  Any other things we should maybe avoid? I'm not down with super mega body horror (short bursts are fine! - but I don't wanna hear about how eyeballs melt for more than 1 sentence ya feel- which I once got a full 6 sentences of that from my library bargain bin oof). 

Yo a slushie themed monster would be very cool. Purple could be acid ie: pokemon even lol. You could even sponsor some of them to be like your soda situation hah. Us planning a marketing campaign for alien space soda that doesn't exist rofl. 
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As long as you let me know if we go longer than a week without a post- I'm chillin' :) Not going anywhere here. This RP does require more brain on average for me to write though- which is why I think I've been struggling with speed here haha. I'll try to pick up the pace once we get more into the interpersonal/plot stuff rather than the mega mechanics building we have to do first. 

[quote]Red tagged entities (Monsters, NPCs, and Crawlers) can no longer see your HP bar![/quote]
I thought this bit of and this item was interesting, wanna see what Hannah does with it!